Envy
Envy
Envy is the emotion experienced when someone lacks another’s quality, achievement, or possession and either desires it or wishes that the other lacked it. Unlike jealousy, which involves fear of losing something you have, envy is about wanting what you do not have.
Why It Matters Erotically
Envy can drive competition, desire, and self-reflection in erotic fiction. It can be a source of tension, motivation, or even transformation for characters.
Writing Tips
- Use envy to reveal character vulnerabilities and desires.
- Show how envy can lead to growth, rivalry, or destructive behaviour.
- Distinguish envy from jealousy in internal monologue and dialogue.
Example
Example "She watched her friend’s easy confidence, a sharp ache blooming in her chest. If only she could move through the world with such freedom." Why it works: Captures the longing and self-awareness at the heart of envy.
Common Pitfalls
- Confusing envy with jealousy—remember, envy is about wanting, jealousy is about fearing loss.
- Overusing envy as a negative trait; it can also inspire positive change.